假如你是李华，你代表你们班同学给你们学校新来的外籍教师Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件，告诉他大家对他第一

Dear Mr. Smith,

cmaedu.comOn behalf of the students of our class, I e-mail you telling you how we feel about your first-week teaching in our class. All of us students think highly of your way of teaching, as you can always make your class lively and interesting. In addition, you are such a learned man that we can learn a lot from you and most important of all, you are patient with us. Frankly, you have built up our confidence in learning English well.

Some of us are still poor at English and need your help. We hope you will speak a little bit slowly so that we can understand you better. Besides, would you please spend more time with us, joining in our after school activities so that we have more chances to practice our oral English?

cmaedu.comIf you have any difficulties in your life here, just tell us. We are ready to offer you any help.

Yours,

Li Hua

cmaedu.com试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，给外教反应一周以来的感受，使用第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时。要点文章都已经给了出来，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】高级词汇的运用是本文最大的亮点：介词短语On behalf of 代表…；think highly of高度评价….；In addition而且；Frankly坦率地说；built up our confidence建立自信等等；在写作的时候，我们要选择合适的和文章内容相一致的高级词汇让我们的文章更有层次感。

急需一篇英语作文 上周五你邀请外籍教师Smith来校做关于英语写作的讲座，你将写一封email向他表示感谢

Thank you for your lecture . From your lecture we students have a good understanding of English and the custom in your country. We can't thank you enough .

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想寄电子邮件给我们外教！但他的邮箱是gmail！怎么办？

"您好，

用QQ邮箱吧，只要有QQ，通过手机或电脑浏览器mail.qq.com登陆即可激活开通邮箱，邮箱填写:QQ号@qq.com，没有就到zc.qq.com注册一下，支持注册任何需要邮箱的平台。

用户名支持设置为【英文@qq.com】【手机@qq.com】【用户名@foxmail.com】商务两用，这个功能是实现一个邮箱拥有多个邮箱地址，意思是所有设置的邮箱地址都会收到同一个邮箱。

设置方法：

cmaedu.com1、通过电脑浏览器登陆网页版，

2、左上角设置---选择账户---即可注册其它用户名，

同时邮箱要是用的多，建议装个专业手机QQ邮箱客户端4.0，通过浏览器或app搜索即可下载，安装好打开软件---添加邮箱选择对应服务商---输入帐 号和密码即可绑

定，支持imap/pop3/exchange绑定和多帐号管理,设置简单，新邮件即时提醒，同步通讯录，集成漂流瓶让邮箱更加有趣，文件中转 站，日历添加行程安排提醒，记事

本，广告邮件汇聚，还有夜间免打扰设置等功能。

希望对你有所帮助！"

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给外教发邮件，求指导

看你们之间的关系如何啊，要是仅仅上课联系，那就以简单的问候开始吧，如果有问题也可以问一些，也算是你们联系的一个开端，你不说想出去留学吗，你就可以尝试着问外教一些他们的文华等知识啊。要是已经私交都已经不错了，那就是好说了，聊一聊你们私交有关的话题啊，这时候在心里给出建议，（如果有错误，请指出）等，就等小作文联系了。

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给外教发邮件 开头怎么写

cmaedu.com开头写Dear+外教的名字，例如Dear Mary,然后直接切入话题即可，不必说很多客套话。

假设你是莉莉，请你给外籍教师peter写封电子邮件，邀请他参加你们班级的周末活动，一起去参观当地的

cmaedu.comDear MR. Peter:

Hi,I'm Lily,remenber me?Your student in class 888 grade 2.

The weather forecast said this weekend will be a nice day. And our class are planing to visit the Chinese architecture theme park.There are all kinds of Chinese architecture from Xia dynasty to nowadays you can see in this park.Would you like to go with us?

We will go this Saturday.If you have time and would like to go with us,please gather with us at the schoolgate this Saturday 8:30 a.m. and then,we will go there by bus together.

yours sincerely Lily

纯手打手工哦，望采纳！